[合集] 【原创仿剧本】goodbye，my love（09.08.05更新完结）

joycechen1985

刚刚有点无聊，特别想写些乱七八糟的东西，于是这篇brian和justin的番外（面前算是吧，呵呵）其实就是一个我脑海里设想的离别镜头，贴出来与“知己”分享，水平太一般，各位亲们多多包涵，欢迎多提意见。

goodbye，my love

Scene：the Pittsburgh airport

Justin was going aboard an aeroplane  to N.Y.  
  

Justin(passport and air ticket in his hand): we don't need any commitment to prove our love, right?

（低着头，片刻无语，突然抬头，凝视着brian）

Justin：I’ll be back，I promise.

              The memorise will belong to us in common，forever.



Justin（上前抱住Brian，在耳边轻轻说）：Keep in touch with me，ok？

  
During going forward to the entrance, suddenly Justin turned around and shout aloud.

Justin：Brian！（一时哽咽）

        I—— LOVE——YOU！

Brian一怔，之后微微扯动一下嘴角，神色平静，看不出是喜是悲

Brian：Hey——remember that？

       ——no excuses.no apologies.no regrets.
  
Brian（深深地望着Justin）：go,and find your way，sunshine！

Brian露出一抹略带苦涩的含蓄笑容，Justin眼眶微微湿润，伫立在原地

Justin（望着brian挥动的手，默默地）：goodbye Pittsburgh.

                                                         goodbye——my love.


TO BE CONTINUED

zhzhx1963

回复 7# cora


    汗{:3_202:}

马马虎虎的鱼

支持一下

xyw8221

写的很好

狻猊

恶，姐姐英文的真是要偶命了，不过写的不错，B&J的性格很是体现了出来，努力啊，来个长篇怎样~~~

woaimeg

呵呵，应你的强烈要求过来留个脚印。短片写的很不错，不过啊，你明知道我是M迷是不是，居然就这么把他耍单了。哼哼，作为补偿，下回咱来个长篇的，不许再欺负小M了。

cora

合并好了~~

joycechen1985

66# cora
呵，是连着的。
那麻烦版主把justin's diary（片段）那个帖子和大家的回帖也合并到这里面来吧，我把自己贴的重复的那个帖子删掉，这样看起来整齐一点呢~~:s14

cora

64# joycechen1985
原来这个日记也是系列里面的一篇啊，我以为是独立的就没有合并进来了

hungrycat

啊~~。。justin的日记。。。好有感觉啊~~~。。。
。。话说这小剧。。。。。我。。我要膜拜。。膜拜。。。很有feel~~~~短篇好~~~。。最有甜死了~~~~

hpl

最终章了啊!還會再有別的系列出來吧?
我要重頭再好好看過一遍.!{:3_250:}

joycechen1985

tomorrow is a new day

sometimes we do not feel                 有时候，我们感受不到
like we want to feel                           我们想感受的
sometimes we do not achieve           有时候，我们达不到
what we want to achieve                  我们想达到的
sometimes things that happe            有时候，周围发生的事情
do not make sense                            毫无意义
sometimes life leads us in directions  有时候，生活把我们带向
that are beyond our control               无法控制的方向


it is at these times,most of all           就是这些时候，我们中的多数人
that we need someone                     都需要有个人
who will quietly understand us          默默地理解我们
and be there to support us               在身边支持我们
i want you to know                            我希望你知道
that i am here for you                        我就在你身边
in every way                                      无论发生什么事情
and remember that though                记住
things may be difficult now                虽然现在困难重重
tomorrow is a new day                      但明天，又是崭新的一天


                                                     ——《tomorrow is a new day》


自述（Michael）：when the sun rises as usual，lives still keep going on...I know

six days ago,I wept with a broken heart in Brians's arms.（笑）damn it，I even imagine he will laugh me out as it in rest of my life.（郁闷了一会儿）ok,whatever，who care.I just know they supported me through the most difficult time of my life.But——（神秘地笑）Ben and I helped somebody too at the same time.


scene：Brian's loft   
       in the kingsize bed  11:05 P.M.

Brian（低吼一声，释放了积压已久的热情，汗湿地瘫软在Justin身上，笑着喘息）：god，you have an amazing，practiced technology sunshine!
Justin（酣畅的情事过后，满足地翻个身，把Brian压在身下，笑着，手在对方胸口轻轻抚摸，暧昧地）：you are still crazy and good at fuck.
Brian（自负地笑，玩弄着Justin前额的湿湿的头发）：I am an expert at any time...you know it,don't you,honey?
Justin（并不打算否认，幸福地笑着，哄着孩子气的Brian，轻轻舔咬着他的耳垂）：yeah，you are always the best.I really want you to stay inside me forever.
Brian（被Justin逗弄得全身骚动起来，抓住他的手，用力把Justin重新压回身下，将他的手拉至头顶上，用低哑性感的嗓音诱惑着）：let's do it again and you'll be too satisfied to forget those guys in New York.
Justin（闻言，认真得像是许下承诺似的）：nobody but you.
Brian（欲火焚身的野兽，意外听到如此真情地告白，一瞬间，为之动容，深情地睇着Justin，不知是说给自己听还是对Justin说）：...you have no chance to regret sunshine...because...I won't let you go again anyway...

接着满室只剩下两人交缠的旖旎风光和令人血脉喷张的淫糜呻吟，甜蜜的爱意尽在不言中......

自述（Jusitn）：if life is a journey surrounding love,we will be the end of each other,just as the very beginning.
                our stories started from a sex but love is our happy ending...tomorrow is a new day and we have been ready for it,new stories belong to us will begin immediately...



THE END.


PS:终于告一段落了，god，好辛苦。原来写故事真的会上瘾，之前偶尔写些随笔、散文什么的还不觉得怎样，这次玩票地续写B&J的故事，竟然连写了两周。:s22    今天发发狠，告诉自己一定要搞定ending，然后开始休息，好好工作、学习。感谢大家这些日子的关注与支持，希望最终章能让你们满意，呵~88

joycechen1985

sorry,I'm late

scene:Debbie's house       7：30 P.M.

in the living-room

Debbie（拉着Justin的手坐在沙发上，轻拍着他看似依旧稚嫩的脸颊，微笑着感慨）:sunshine...look at you...oh honey...you're charming so much.

Emmtte（捏捏Justin的下巴，由衷地）：sweet heart，you are like a noble prince.

Teb（拿着马克杯，呷了一口咖啡，站在一旁附和）：aha~absolutly.

Justin露出了久违的羞涩笑容，亦如高中毕业舞会前大家眼中那个盛装打扮的孩子。

Melanie（倚靠着流理台，放进嘴里一口蛋糕）：How is it going in NewYork?

Justin（笑着回应）：fine,just too busy.

Melanie（胳膊顶了顶旁边的Lindsay，低声地）：oh，you really should taste it.the cake is so damn delicious!

Debbie（忍不住插话，骄傲地）:thanks,sweety.Vic's secret method——

大家敏感地一愣，顿时陷入沉默......

Debbie（看看大家，不自然地大笑几声，打趣）：It doesn't matter，he likes being a focus.

Lindsay无奈地白了一眼Melanie，Melanie吐吐舌头，一脸无辜，不作声地闷头继续吃着蛋糕，味如嚼蜡。

Justin（拉着Debbie的手，看着她，惋惜地摇头）:I'm sorry for your lost.

Debbie（担忧地回头看看楼梯）：thanks.Michael is more serious...

众人不约而同地看向通往Michael房间的楼梯......

Justin（眼神坚定）：Trust him...Brian must can handle it.

............................................................................................................................
scene:Michael's room

Michael（坐在床上，手里翻着心爱的漫画书，含笑回忆着）：the first time,we met in my comic book store.actually he looked so hot.I still remember his brown jacket,his glasses and his...（自嘲地尴尬地笑笑）ass.

Brian（低着头坏坏地笑笑，看不出是认真还是玩笑地接茬）：aha~fuck is forever.

Michael（无奈地斜睨了一眼身边双肘撑着半躺在床上的老友，不置可否地继续着自己的思绪）：maybe...maybe a first sight love started from that time.

Brian（不耐烦地好像在说着老掉牙的故事似的接茬）：and then you became his husband in damn Canada.（不可思议地看着Michael，皱着眉）Jesus Christ you married!

Michael（被Brian孩子气的耿耿于怀逗笑了）：come on Brian，because I had grown up.I had no idear why you cared about it for a long time.

Brian（自嘲地笑）：I didn't know ...（若有所思）I didn't know untill that night...Babylon's bomb night...（神经质地笑笑，眼底却没有一丝暖意）fuck damn crazy.

Michael（了然地陈述着事实）：Justin has been special for you from the very beginning.you were a real coward,whatever whether or not you recognize.

Brian陷入某种可怕地失去Justin的假设中，仿佛时间又回到了那个混乱可怕的晚上，他沉默着......

Michael（认真地问）：if you lost Justin，what would you do?

Brian（想了想，放弃了继续假设）：...I don't know...（松了一口气）fortunately he is alive.

Michael手中的漫画书一滑，掉在了地板上。他再也无力撑起坚强的伪装，双手掩面哭泣。

Brian（坐起身子，一把搂过Michael颤抖的身体，让他的头枕着自己的肩膀，一边亲吻着他的额头，一边抚慰着他的头发）：sorry Mikey...I'm late...

TO BE CONTINUED

joycechen1985

60# cora
我也不晓得怎么弄会比较好，既能让大家随时知道我的更新，有能把各个短篇和大家的回帖弄得整齐点，麻烦斑竹帮帮忙喽:s21   感激不尽

PS：最近身体不适，打算将短篇（起初是这么打算啦，现在不伦不类的也不晓得怎么分类，管他呢，呵）告一段落先，构思近期的最后一幕ing，另外关于英文对白的问题，仔细看都是些简单的口语（其实本人英文也烂得可以），是为了传达出原汁原味的QAF（譬如一些damn、fuck...的口头禅），这个传统Joyce想坚持下去，请亲们体谅       排版等事宜还请版主多费心，小妮子没齿难忘:s25

cora

继续之前合并的话题……
要不把这个帖子也合并到短篇集里面? 因为论坛现在的合并功能会自动把帖子按发帖时间排列，这意味着合并之后新的短篇集可能会排在这个合并贴后面。可能到时Joyce就要手动编辑一下帖子的顺序了（利用每个回帖下方的编辑键就可以编辑自己发的回帖）
Joyce你看想怎样?

joycechen1985

heartless asshole

scene:tomb field
During a simple farewell ceremony,everybody had been sad,facing to Ben's Tombstone.
Debbie（抱住Michael，难掩担忧）:are you ok,sweet heart?
Michael（安慰地拍拍Debbie的背）:yeah,I'm fine...Don't worry about me,Mom.

Mel、Linds、Em、Ted and Hunter站在一旁，默默看着坚强的母子俩。  
Hunter（动情地）:Ben has gone...but we are still here with you...together.
Michael、Debbie听着Hunter的话,从悲伤的情绪中恢复了一些，祖孙三代默契地深深看了看对方，忍住眼泪回给彼此一个鼓励的眼光。

Hunter（想了想，慎重地开口）：...uh...besides I have decided to transfer to Pittsburgh University.

Debbie、Michael一同看向Hunter，其它人也纷纷露出惊讶的神情。

Michael（迷惑不解）：why?...you have never talked to me before.
Debbie（认真的看着Hunter）：Not for us, is it? you know it is unnecessary.
Hunter（两手不停地摩擦着两侧的裤子口袋，眼神中透露出难言的脆弱）：I just...just...don't want to be alone,thinking about...death.
Michael（恍然大悟，上前一下抱住Hunter，沮丧地深深自责）：Oh~~~I am so sorry...
Debbie（抚慰着Hunter的手，轻声）：honey，you will be alright，trust me,and welcome back home.

at the same time
Mel（与Linds窃窃私语）:The fact has proved Brian is a heartless asshole.
Linds（一时语塞，无奈地耸耸肩膀，叹了口气）：...
Ted（无意间听到她们的对话，眼神四处游移着想找些理由解释）：...uh...mybe...I...un...I think——（突然瞪大眼睛，望着不远处一个英挺的身影箭步向这边走来，大声地）：he's coming.

众人闻言，看向那个拎着行李袋风尘仆仆朝这边走来的人，定睛一瞧，他背后隐约有缕缕金丝迎风飘舞。

Emmtte（一脸不可思议，嘴张张合合几次之后，确定不是幻觉）：...Oh,my god...

TO BE CONTINUED

joycechen1985

57# cora

斑竹费心了     感动ing:s37

cora

我把Joyce之前的帖子都合并在一起了，看成功不
论坛改版后的合并功能……是个数学逻辑问题 = =

jiwei112

看了
留一贴在此......

janlam

嗯....那沙发在这边坐一下....{:3_278:}

joycechen1985

to be with you，my friends

scene: in Justin's Studio of N.Y.City    3:15 P.M.
A fierce debate was being between Justin and David（Justin's agent）.

David（烦躁地在不大的空间里踱来踱去，松了松领带，停下来深吸一口气，尽力让自己保持冷静，转过身面对Justin）:Taylor,please calm down ，and then think about it again,carefully,ok?
Justin（单手从身后撑着，靠着工作台，冷静地再次试图跟David沟通）：David I'll come back in a few days later,I promise.My friend is having a hard time now.He need me behind him.
David（奋力摘下金边半框眼镜，激动地提高了声调）：You——You can't imagine how many people who have talent are managed to show themselves every day!Hard working is just for these which you have achieved——success and fame!But look at you,give up National Artists Association's invitation so easily!
Justin（沉思片刻，站直了身体，走近David，抓住他的肩膀,看着他，郑重地）：I know you did a lot of things for me David.So I'v been appreciating you very much.But——I'm sorry this time...for my decision.
David（看着Justin眼中的坚定，有点感动，戴回手上几欲捏碎的眼镜）：...I give you my words you are going to regret some day.
David（利落地掏出手机，拨了一通电话，认命地口气略有点缓和）：But I don't wanna be like you.I will do my best to postpone the date.
David's cellphone：hello（Tom Gil，the chairman of National Artists Association）
David（非常干练地）：yeah,Mr. Gil,this is David Brown...
... ...
on the other side Justin dialed Brian's number...
Jusitn's cellphone：yeah
Justin：listen,I decide to go back with you.
        Michael and Ben both are our friends.I think I should be with you together at this time. There is nothing more important than that.wait for me.
David（向Tom Gil表达了谢意，并代表Justin表示很荣幸受到邀请，结束电话,公事化地口吻）：Done.But remember,you have only one week.
Justin（真诚地看了看David，微笑）：Got it,thanks.

scene：in a taxi which was on a way to the airport
Brian（深沉地笑着，开玩笑）：Are you serious,sunny boy?The guy,I mean your hot agent Mr.Brown.Have you got permission from him?
Brian's cellphone（Justin无奈地）：Come on Brian,David is a good guy.Please don't kid him ok?I will arrive at the airport in an hour later.See you then.
Brian（轻声笑了笑，恢复了正经）：hey Justin——
Brian's cellphone（等着Brian接下来的话）：...
Brian（欲语还休）：Uh...nothing...
Brian's cellphone：...Michael is gonna be ok，right?
Brian（轻叹一声，眼神迷茫地看着车窗外的落日余晖，含糊不清地）：...I don't know...

Scene：in Justin's Studio
Justin（拿着手机，有些出神，与电话那头的Brian一同陷入沉默）：...

TO BE CONTINUED

joycechen1985

5# cora

交通法规，不知道为啥，教练都简称为“交则”，呵

mik

温暖的大家庭

cora

4# joycechen1985
嗯 写着写着就会越来越长啦~
交则是什么

joycechen1985

2# cora
谢谢cora提醒，我也在考虑:s14      打算明天考完交则有空再弄，呵