[翻译+原创]几首与QaF相通的歌曲(词)赏析.

ReynoldCable

因为我觉得逐句直译会破坏全文的完整性,而且也没有美感,所以就根据我对歌词的理解按段落译了。愿诸君喜欢,并不吝赐教。

1.以下这首"More"是我在论坛上看一位网友发的,一时兴起,就拿来译了译。
More
More than the greatest love
The world has known
This is the love I'll give to you alone
More than the simple words
I try to say
I only live to love you more each day

More than you’ll ever know
My arms long to hold you so
My life will be in your keeping
Walking, sleeping, laughing, weeping

Longer than always is a long, long time
But far beyond forever you’ll be mine

I know I’ve never lived before
And my heart is very sure
No one else could love you more

超越这世上的一切,我的爱,只为你一人盛开。你是我心灵的乐章,我存在,只为给你我的爱。
不知你是否明白,我只想永远在你怀里,你的爱将在我心里刻下一生的烙印。
只有时间能见证永恒,我们的爱将于时间同在
你是我生命的奇迹,我的心只渴望你的爱。


2.推荐我最喜欢的歌的其中一首,是Mariah·Carey的"My all"。其实她的歌我喜欢的一共也不过3、4首吧,这首歌据保守估计我应该已经听了200遍左右了(这是我的WMP统计出的结果,可不是我胡编乱吹的哦,而且还不包括我在CD-Walkman上听的次数呢)。
My all
I am thinking of U in my sleepless solitude tonight.
If it's wrong to love U,then my heart just won let me right.
Cause I drowned in U and I won pull thourgh without U by my side.

I give my all to have just one more night with U;
I risk my life to feel your body next to mine.
Cause I can go on liveing in the momory of our song.
I give my all for U love tonight.

Baby can U feel me imagining I looking in your eyes.
I can see U cleray vividly emblazoned in my mind
and yet U so far like a dinstant star I'm wishing on tonight.
在这寂寞的夜晚,我因为想你而无法入睡。是我的心选择了你,如果这是个错误,那我也无能为力。(因为)没有你在我身边,我只能沉迷在对你的爱中难以自拔。
我愿意付出一切,只求换取你多一夜的爱;我不顾一切,只想(再一次)感受你的气息。(因为)我无法生活在往昔的记忆里,我唯一的愿望就是你再爱我一晚。
你已深深地印在了我心里,但却又象夜空的繁星一样离我那样遥远。Baby,你知道吗,我很想你。


3.在QaF的最后,Brian和Justin决定不结婚的时候,我突然想到了Mariah·Carey的这首"Butterfly"。我不是个B-J迷,我关注更多的(事实上是唯一关心的)是有关Michael的爱情故事(尤其是和Ben)。QaF我看了20几遍,虽不敢自大,但也有一些小小的体会,这便是其中之一。
Butterfly
When U love someone so deeply they become your life.
It's easy to succumb overwhelming fears inside.
Blindly I imagined I could keep U under glass.
Now I understand to hold U,I must open up my hand and watch U rise.

Spread your wings and prepare to fly,for U have become a butterfly.
Fly abandonly into the sun.If U should return to me,we truly were meant to be.
So spread your wings and fly,butterfly

I have learned that beauty has to flourish in the light,wild horses ride unbridled or their spirit dies.
U have given me the courage to be all that I can,and I truly feel your heart will lead U back to me when you're ready to land.

I can't pretend these tears aren't overflowing steadily.I can't prevent this hurt from almost overtaking me.
But I will stand and say goodbye,for you'll never be mine until U know the way it feels to fly.

So flutter through the sky,butterfly. Fly...spread your wings and fly,butterfly.

如果他已成为你生命的全部,你付出的爱越多,就会越害怕失去。我也曾经这样过,以为将蝴蝶(你)禁锢在玻璃瓶中就能永远地拥有。现在我明白了,只有打开双手看你离开才能真正得到你的爱。
你已破茧而出,所以,展开翅膀准备飞吧,不顾一切地飞向你的太阳(理想)。当你决定着陆的时候,你会看到我还在原地等你。所以,放心飞吧,我的(小)蝴蝶。
我现在懂得，美丽只有在阳光下绽放才璀璨,(正如同)自由的灵魂不该受到拘束。你给我勇气，让我从容面对一切,我知道,当你准备回来时,你的心一定会把你带到我身边。
我不能装作无所谓,因为泪水已夺眶而出,而心中的痛苦更是让我无处藏身。但我还是会笑着和你说再见,因为如果你不知道飞翔的滋味,就永远不会真正地属于我。
飞吧,蝴蝶,展开你地翅膀,自由地飞吧。


4.大家一定看得烦了吧?请允许我再贴一首Mariah·Carey&Luther·Vandross的"Endless love".God I love it so much.It's my fantastic song.I always imagine that my prince dance with me by the song and give me an everlasting kiss at the end of it.
Endless love
My love, there's only U in my life,the only thing that right.
My first love,you'r every breath that I take,you'r every step I make.
And I, I want to share all my love with U.
No one else will do.U know.
And your eyes,they tell me how much U care.
Oh yes,U will always be my endless love.
Two hearts, two hearts that beat as one.Our lives had just begun.
And forever,I'll hold U close in my arms,I can't resist your charms.
And I, I'll be a fool for U.I'm sure,U know I don't mind.
Baby,U mean the world to me.I know I founding U my endless love.

Yeah~~~Doo~~~
Wooh,In love,I'll be that fool for U.I'm sure, that U know I don't mind (U know I don't mind).
Oh yeah, yeah, yes.You'll be the only one.'Coz no, no one can deny,this love I have inside,and I'll give it all to U.
My love, my love, my love,my endless love.

My love

我的爱(人)，你是我生命的全部，是我生命里最美好的一切。
我最初的爱，你在我每一次呼吸里，在我每一个脚步中。
我渴望给你我全部的爱，不留一丝一毫。你知道，只有你能让我这样。
你的眼睛告诉我，你是多么地在乎我。我知道，你将成为我永恒的至爱。
我们的爱是多么地和谐，我们的生活才刚刚开始。
我希望永远躺在你怀里(我希望永远抱着你)，我无法抗拒你的魅力。
你的爱让我丧失理智，我知道，你从不介意。
Baby，你就是我的世界，我的一切。我知道，我找到了我的至爱。

Ps:我觉得"first love"直译为"初恋"不符合全文的气氛;"I'll hold U close in my arms"是由男女合唱的，所以对于不同的人含义是不一样的；最后一段因为比较杂乱，而且它的存在主要是为了满足乐曲的需求，所以就没译。

[ Last edited by ReynoldCable on 2005-12-19 at 11:41 ]

onlyseven

好喜欢More和butterfly的歌词。这几句是我最喜欢的。

I only live to love you more each day。
No one else could love you more。

Now I understand to hold U,I must open up my hand and watch U rise.
If U should return to me,we truly were meant to be.
I truly feel your heart will lead U back to me when you're ready to land.
But I will stand and say goodbye,for you'll never be mine until U know the way it feels to fly.

from912

虽然歌词也有点那个意思，但还是过于温情，和原剧气质不很符合。
我觉得最能阐释结局的歌还是原剧里的插曲——Radio Head的 the mess we are in

toni斑斑曾经写过翻译和介绍，超配情节的
我给个链接：http://www.qafone.cc/viewthread.php?tid=9922&fpage=1

cora

...嗯...楼主素mariah滴fans吧...她滴歌偶也觉得很好听
其实平时听歌滴时候偶也听到很多很符合qaf心情滴歌，偶就很喜欢atb滴believe in me，这素一首电子歌曲，素刚看qaf的时候听到滴，第一感觉就让偶想起鸟babylon
还有一首素stereophonics滴maybe tomorrow，britpop风格滴歌都挺容易上耳，这首歌有点劫后余生滴感觉，充满希望
不过还米有时间帖上来...下次整理好之后再来楼主这里交流哈～

[ Last edited by cora on 2005-12-17 at 13:15 ]

candyperfume

呵呵，Butterfly那首歌是Mariah被迫跟老公离婚时创作的，
歌词也挺能说明她的心情的吧。。。。。俺是初二第一次
听这首歌，到现在仍然是俺最喜欢的一首Mariah的歌。。。
还有一首I still believe 俺也很喜欢，感觉也蛮符合BJ的啊~

I STILL BELIEVE

         
         You look in my eyes

         And I get emotional inside.

         I know it's crazy

         But you still can touch my heart.

         And after all this time,

         You'd think that I,

         I wouldn't feel the same

         But time melts into nothing

         And nothing's changed.

  

         Chorus:

         I still believe, someday you and me,

         Will find ourselves in love again.

         I had a dream, someday you and me,



         Will find ourselves in love again.
         
          Each day of my life

         I'm filled with all the joy I could find.

         You know that I am not the desperate type.

         If there's one spark of hope left in my grasp

         I'll hold it with both hands.

         It's worth the risk of burning to have a second chance.

         No, no, no, no, no, no I need you baby.

         I still believe that we can be together.

         If we believe that true love never has to end,

         Then we must know that we will love again.

  

PS：俺帮LZ贴一下butterfly，可以吧:) 超好听啊~


[ Last edited by candyperfume on 2005-12-17 at 13:14 ]

dchx

那首蝴蝶的感觉真好啊~~~~~
能不能把歌儿贴上来呢？或者给个链接也行啊。真得很向往呢~~~~