joycechen1985

6# mik
惭愧啊，半中不洋的风格实在是本人英文水平有限造成的，并非为了创新，口语化的东西没那么多限制，而且表达简单，旁白要有些辅助说明的深层意义在里面，所以一定得借住母语，呵  一定让mik失望了吧:s37

joycechen1985

Scene:  John F. Kennedy International Airport of N.Y.City  10:45 A.M.

At the Exit

Brian Kinney who wore a black short coat，dark blue jeans and sunglasses was going out from the exit，carring a baggage.

Brian（停住脚步，摘下墨镜， 环顾四周来来往往忙碌的人们，微微颔首，嘴角漾起一抹自嘲的微笑）：God.It's unbelieveable I come here.
         I am absolutly crazy.

The cellphone in his pocket was ringing.He took it out and opened the cover.
A message was on the screen:

     "Hey,welcom.How's NewYork's air?:) Today I have a show in PaceWildenstein.See u there.

     10:50 A.M. From :SUNSHINE"

Brian（盯着屏幕的双眼泄露了心情，笑容更加深了）: My sunshine is busy glaring in New York.

Brian closed his cellphone and walked out the terminal.

Scene:Out the teminal

Brian（单手遮挡着刺眼的阳光，抬头看看晴朗如洗的天空，又重新戴上Prada的新款墨镜）：
                                                       Hello New York!

                                                                                  I'm coming,my artist.


TO BE CONTINUED

mik

已经是shinning star的小J
仍然和大叔保持着联系
想念着对方
期待着他们相见喔

mik

对白用英文
旁白则用中文
LZ很有创意

离愁别绪都写在了BJ的脸上
【再见】
就是重新见面
相信心里都装着对方的BJ
一定会再度相见的

janlam

Joyce的迷你剧本又出来啦
这次读起来像是上一篇goodbye my love的续，下一篇会是他们再次见面吗~
cora 发表于 2009-7-24 16:33

俺看完后最想问滴也素这过~~~{:3_194:}

joycechen1985

2# cora
首先谢谢cora对我的鼓励，呵，写的不好，希望你经常来“串门子”，多交流哦
然后就是回答你的问题——其实下一篇写什么和什么时候开始写都还没决定，呵，有空的时候吧，应该不会太迟。:s14

cora

Joyce的迷你剧本又出来啦
这次读起来像是上一篇goodbye my love的续，下一篇会是他们再次见面吗~

joycechen1985

scene:N.Y.CITY  12:00 P.M.

JUSTIN TAYLOR WHO WAS A NEW SHINNING STAR OF ARTS IN N.Y. WAS PAINTING IN HIS APARTMENT.

A RINGING FROM THE TELEPHONE BROKE THE SILENCE OF MID-NIGHT.

HE DIDN'T CARE ABOUT IT AT ALL,AND FOCUSED ON HIS NEW CREATION——MISSING.

AFTER KEEPING NOISY FOR A MOMENT,IT STOPPED.THE ENTIRE ROOM WAS QUIET AGAIN.

SOME TIMES LATER...

SUDDENLY HE PUT DOWN THE BRUSH AND LOOKED AT THE CANVAS THOUGHTFULLY.

Justin（看了一眼手腕上的表，已是凌晨一点，露出一抹淡淡的微笑）:DONE.


                                                                                              FOR MY 24-YEAR-OLD.

HE WALKED TO THE SOFA,PUTTING HIS ASS IN IT AND PRESSED THE KEY OF TELEPHONE ANSWERING MACHINE.

TELEPHONE:THERE IS ONE VOICE-MESSAGE YOU'V GOT.

JUSTIN WAS EXHAUSTED,CLOSED HIS EYES.

TELEPHONE(BRIAN'S VOICE):...HEY SUNNY BOY,IT'S ME...HOW'S IT GOING...I AM GOING TO NEWYORK TOMORROW...UH...TAKE A VACATION.YOU KNOW I'V BEEN BUSY,SO（局促地笑了两声）——WHATEVER,SEE YOU LATER.

JUSTIN STILL KEPT HIS EYES CLOSED WITH A SOFT SMILE.

JUSTIN（幽幽地）:MISS YOU...

TO BE CONTINUED

cora

4# hpl
让我想起Ice Age 3 里面的一句：He's at wherever he wants to be.
你去的地方就是我在的地方，很有爱

hpl

go,and find your way，sunshine！

好想Brian接著對Justin說,你去的地方,就是我在的地方{:3_150:}

janlam

分离的伤感
很Brian的作风
唉~~~两个相爱的人为什么不能在一起呢~~~{:3_150:}

cora

沙发先……是剧本型的文章噢

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能想象到Justin当时的神情，不知道他们拿到剧本的时候是不是也这样呢
这个标题让我想起James Blunt的<Goodbye My lover>{:3_199:}

PS  楼主在标题上加个【原创】的前缀吧