lovehydeken

看了好想哭，這段真是好，讓後來510的那段更有意義了，哈哈哈，Brian這下心痛死了吧，不過這樣看起來，508-509兩集看不到BJ在一起的畫面了

lovehydeken

下面是引用ringdeng于2005-05-25 14:55发表的:
有点老调重弹的感觉，估计编剧是江郎才尽了。
第二季的分手理由跟这个差不多啊......难道三、四两季的剧情都白发展了？？？

沒有白發展啦，第二季分手時，Justin沒有想清楚，他覺得Brian不愛他，但ethan愛他，所以跑到ethan那邊。

但復合後Justin已經確定知道Brian愛他，問題在於Brian的行為模式，以及BJ的相處模式不是Justin要的

Justin在507之前就把他要的說的很清楚
J:You already know what I want. I already told you.

他要的是一種life，更切近於family的生活
B: That's right. A husband  A family. A home . EV-er-ything that makes life worth living.

Brian明白但不願給，不是給不起，而是「不願給」
B: "Not can't. `Can't' denotes that I'm incapable. It's that I won't.

Justin回說
J:I accept that. I suppose that is one of the the reasons I've always
loved you.
他接受Brian這種「can't和won't」的繆論，只有一個原因，因為他愛Brian。

但Justin所期待得到的life
如果Brian給的起卻不願給，Justin沒辦法留下來，507裡Justin就是想通了這點，所以才要離開。

這和第二季分手不一樣，第二季Justin是以為Brian不愛他
但第五季的分手是Justin在明白Brian能愛他卻不願愛他的情況下提出的

我覺得Justin很痛苦
明知道Brian可以愛他但又眼睜睜看著Brian不願愛他
真的很痛苦

Brian能愛卻不願愛
「can't和won't」的繆論
逼的Justin離開




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lovehydeken

我翻了一下，可能不是翻的很好，大家看看吧

前面一大段是描述Brian跑到Michael和Ben的新家拼命敲門，當時已經很晚了，
Ben開門發現是喝醉酒大鬧的Brian，怕他吵醒鄰居，把他扶進門來。進門後Brian
吵著要見Michael。
  
Brian:我要見你老婆，那個可愛的小女人在哪還是要說那個可愛的小老公(又在諷刺了)

: Ben: You mean Michael?
  Ben:你是說Michael

: Brian: (puts his hands up in front of his face and clenches his
: fingers in a claw-like manner) Who the F**K else would I be referring
: to?
  Brian:他媽的除了他還會是誰

: Ben: He's aSLEEP!
  Ben:他已經在睡了

: Brian: (VERY serious now and in Ben's face. Combination shout and
: growl) ROUSE HIM! Wake Him Up!! (looks toward the stairs) MICHAEL!
: Get your ass down?br>
  Brian:把他給我叫醒，Michael你給我滾下來。

註解：Brian難過的神智不清了，不過原諒他啦，Justin的決定放手讓他瘋狂，
     而且看情形，他知道Justin在Michael家。

  
Ben試圖叫Brian離開，但Brian仍然大鬧不肯離開，Michael走下樓梯，跟Ben說沒關係
  他可以處理的。然後Michael看著Brian，一副你給我好好解釋這個情況的表情。

: Brian: Well, Mikey. ConGRATulations.
  Brian:哼，Mikey，真是恭喜你了

: Michael: For WHAT?
  Michael:恭喜什麼

: Brian: You WON!
  Brian:你贏了

: Brian: (following with the same drunken smile on his face) To the
: spoiler... goes the victory.
  Brian:你的破壞終於成功了、勝利了

: Michael: I DON'T know what you're talking about.
  Michael:我不知道你在說些什麼

: Brian: Of COURSE you don't. No one plays dewy-eyed innocent like
: you. (leaning into Michael's face and forming a sneer with each word)
: Although at 35 you're getting a bit long in the tooth for short pants.
  Brian:你當然不知道，沒有人比得上你的純潔無辜，即便35歲了仍然穿著白內褲
  (後面不知有沒有翻對，不過Brian失去理智到口不擇言了)

: Michael: (sneering back) Speaking about outgrowing your act, nothing
: is more pathetic, to use one of your favorite words, than an over-the-
: hill club boy (turns and walks away)
  Michael:比起你那老是長不大的行為，沒什麼比這更可悲了，你就繼續諷刺吧，
  你這個過了三十歲的俱樂部男孩
  (Michael講的還真是貼切啊)

: Brian: YOU infected him.
  Brian:你影響了他(這句話證明了Brian已經瘋掉了，他太難過了)

: Michael stops and turns to look at Brian. Confused.
  Michael停下了腳步，疑惑的看著Brian

: Brian: (furious) You and your petty bourgeois, mediocre, conformist,
: assimilationist, life! (pause. They look at each other) Thanks to you
: he has visions (sneeringly, mocking) Babies! Weddings! White picket
: fences dancing (he points his forefinger to the side of his head) in
: his blond little head.
  Brian:就是你和你那二流的、平庸的、守舊的的生活，真是感謝你啊，
       現在他那小小的金髮腦袋裡憧憬著小孩、婚禮、白色圍籬。

: Michael: and you think *I* put them there.
  Michael:所以你認為是「我」把這些塞進他腦袋

: Brian: (waving his left hand in the air) Before you and your husband
: tied the noose around your neck, he was (raging now) PERFECTLY HAPPY!
: And now...he's a defector...just like the rest of y..
  Brian:在你和你老公在脖子上綁上束縛之前，他曾經是那麼快樂，
       但現在因為你的影響，這一切都.....
       (ps.再一次的覺得Brian難過到瘋了)

: Michael (his turn to get into Brian's face and shout) He was NEVER
: perfectly happy!
  Michael:(轉向Brian並大吼)他從來沒有快樂過

: Brian stares a minute then walks around Michael and into the foyer.
: Michael follows him, talking
  Brian僵住了一下，走過Michael身旁進入門廳，Michael跟過去並說

: Michael: Waiting for years for you to say, `I love you. You're the
: only one one I want'.
  Michael:他等了這麼多年就是希望你說，我愛你，你是我唯一想要的

: Brian: That's... NOT...who... I am
  Brian:那...那...不會是我...那不是我....

: Michael: (loudly, gesturing back at Brian with both hands) Don't we
: ALL know!
  Michael:(大聲且用兩隻手抓住Brian)我們都知道，沒有人不知道

: Brian: (turns away. Line delivered in a slight sing-song manner) and
: now...he's HERE..in YOUR... house.
  Brian:而現在..他..他在這裡...在你的房子裡
      (ps.天啊 Justin在這裡啊 他全都聽到了啊 我要瘋了瘋了)

: Michael: (follows) It's not a house, it's a home
  Michael:這不僅只是個房子，這是個家

: Brian (angry again. Turns to confront him) It's a FARCE. (practically
: screams) It's a FREAK SHOW!
  Brian:(再次被激怒)這是個鬧劇，這一切都是場鬧劇

: Michael: (looking up at Brian defiantly) Call it what you want. I
: really don't care. But he didn't leave because I inFECTed him.
: (Michael is shown in close-up over Brian's right shoulder) He left
: because of YOU.
  Michael:隨便你怎麼說，我不在乎，但是他離開不是因為我影響他，
         他會離開全是因為你
         (ps.鼓掌鼓掌，Michael說的完全正確，Brian你這沒骨氣的男人啊)

: Cut to Brian's face. He is silent, but he has a slight mocking smile
: forming on his face.
: Cut back to Michael
  鏡頭切到Brian的臉，他安靜下來，但臉上仍帶著偽裝的微笑，鏡頭切回Michael

: Michael: Who WOULDN'T?
  Michael:有誰不是?
         (p.s 這句話意思很深，其他Michael也是因為Brian而離開，
              Brian同時失去兩個最愛的人，在這一刻)


: Cut back to Brian. Silent. Not smiling anymore. In fact he is
: stunned. He just stares. His mouth is slightly open and he remains
: silent. Is he shocked by what Michael said it or that is it MICHAEL
: who said it?

鏡頭切到Brian，一陣安靜，他不再微笑，他整個人愣住，一動也不動，
他的嘴角輕微張開，但仍是一片安靜，似乎是被Michael話中的意思震住


Close up of Michael's face
: Close up of Brian's face
: They stare at each other
: Brian turns and walks away

鏡頭切到Michael又切到Brian，他們凝視彼此，然後Brian轉身離開

: Brian walks toward the camera which is shooting up from floor level .
: Michael is by the stairs in the background. Brian walks directly into
: the camera and out of the frame leaving Michael standing in the
: background
: Quick cut to the top of the stairs. Standing at the railing is a
: sober-faced, sad Justin. He stands there for a couple beats , turns
: and walks out of the frame

Michael走上樓，突然鏡頭很快的切到樓梯盡頭扶手處一張平靜的臉，
Justin站在那，看起來是那麼的傷悲，那麼的筋疲力盡、那樣的沮喪。
接著轉身走出鏡頭外。

lovehydeken

再補一段我翻的507 BJ分手那段的翻譯，翻的普通，大家多包涵
謝謝其他朋友的幫忙，我把cookiesumin指正的部分，和lurentt增加的部分一起加入我這段
沒有特別用顏色標出是為了大家閱讀方便，希望兩位不要介意

: J: I made some decisions
  J:我做了一個決定

: B: (unpurses his lips) `bout what
  B:什麼決定

: J: My life
  J:我的人生

: B: Ah!
  B: 什麼

: J: What I want
  J: 我要的是什麼

: B: (he approaches J and is right next to him) I thought you had that
: all worked out. You're going to live of your conSID-er-able
: Hollywood wealth and try your hand at being an artist. (flicker of a
: smile. He's trying to make a joke. He knows something is coming)
  B:(靠向J並站在J旁邊)我以為你已經得到所有你想要的了，豐富的好萊塢經驗，
   而且往成為藝術家前進(Brian微笑著，他試圖使氣氛輕鬆，因為他察覺到了一些
   奇怪的感覺)

: J: (very serious now and a tad irritated) Why are you making fun of
: me?
  J:(很認真且有點惱怒)為什麼你總是不能正經一點

: B: (a bit taken aback) I'M not making fun.
  B: 我沒有

: (Justin looks at him with a slight raising of eyebrows. The message
: is: "then what DO you mean?")
  (Justin輕輕皺起眉頭，似乎在問Brian，那你是什麼意思)

: B: You're making me f**king nervous as hell (and his nervousness is
: evident in his voice and face) (a loud out-take of breath is heard
: from Justin) Just tell me what you want, what you decided..and we can
: go to bed..and f**k.
  B:該死的你讓我緊張起來，你只要告訴我你要什麼，你又決定了什麼，
   然後我們就該上床然後f**k
  (這時Brian的聲音和表情明顯的緊張與焦躁起來，Justin嘆了一大口氣)
  
: J: (slight laugh and smile and shaking of his head). You already know
: what I want. I already told you.
  J:(輕聲的笑出來且帶點笑的搖了搖頭)
   你早就知道我要的是什麼，我早就告訴過你

: B: (His facial expression: `so THIS is what it's all about'. He
: starts to turn away. Then he laughs) That's right. A husband (lapses
: into Brianesque sarcastic tone) A family. A home (he draws this word
: out: Whooome). EV-er-ything that makes life worth living.
  B:(Brian的臉上顯示出：又是為了「這個」，然後轉身並笑出來)
   
是，我知道，你要一個老公、一個家庭、一個家(Brian把尾音拉長，有諷刺的感覺)
   好像有了這些人生才值得

: J (not loud, but forceful) Would you F**King cut it out? (quietly)
: Just *stop* it. (When he says "stop" you can hear what sounds like
: him slapping the counter with the palm of his hand)
  J:(不大聲但很有力道的說)該死的你可以不要再提這些繆論了，停止這些
   (一邊說一邊把手重重的往旁揮)

: B is surprised by the strength of Justin's words and tone. He says
: nothing.
  Brian對Justin說話的語調和字眼感到訝異，他沒再說什麼。

: J (sighs) And I KNOW you can't give me those things
  J:(嘆了口氣)我知道你不能給我這些

: B: "Not can't. `Can't' denotes that I'm incapable. It's that I won't.
  B:不是「不能」，「不能」是指我給不起，我是不願給

: J:I accept that. I suppose that is one of the the reasons I've always
: loved you.
  J:我同意，而我想這就是我一直愛你的原因之一。

: Brian (turns away) Oh. The un-tame-able beast.
  原文註解：Brian轉身離開，唉，這個不被馴服的野獸

: J: (very reasonably, resolutely and calmly) But to be a couple both
: people need to want the same things. Move in the same direction. But
: if they can't... or ..won't (a bit of emotion creeps into his voice
: for a second ) they really have no other place to go.
  J:(平靜又堅決的說)要成為伴侶，兩個人追求的必須是同樣的東西，
   往同樣的方向前進，但如果他們不能...或是...不願(說到這時，Justin眼底
   有著一絲情緒)，那他們將沒有地方可以前進，可以容身。

: B: (Stares at him a minute. Blinks) Probably not.
  B:(盯著Justin一會，眨了眨眼)也許吧，也許真是如此

: J: Then why are we still doing this if we know it's never going to
: work?
  J:那為什麼我們還在這裡，如果我們永遠都達不到我所說的，何必繼續作繭自縛呢？

: Closeup on Brian. He says nothing for about 5 seconds then for softly
: says:
: B: Damned if I know
  B:(鏡頭貼近Brian，他停了五秒什麼也沒說，然後輕聲的說)該死的我怎麼會知道

: J stares at him for another few seconds then turns and walks out of
: the frame. Cut to Brian who takes a drink of water. He watches J as
: he walks over toward the bedroom and picks up his leather jacket
: which is on the step or riser leading to the bed. He puts it on, then
: reaches behind the partition and pulls out his big duffel bag which
: is packed and hoists it over his shoulder..Then he picks up his back
: back and heads towards the door
  總之這段就是Justin開始收行李

  Close-up on Brian who now understands Justin is leaving.
  Brian了解到Justin打算要離開了(天啊天啊 你就這樣讓他走 沒骨氣的男人>_<)

: Full-length long shot of the two of them standing in the middle of
: the room with the door behind them

: Justin drops the bags. Brian looks down at them for a few seconds
: Justin then reaches up with one hand and places it on B's shoulder
: and then puts his hand on Brian's neck and pulls himself toward
: Brian, standing on his toes slightly. He then puts his other arm
: around Brian and pulls him into a hug.
: Brian stands there with both arms awkwardly at his side and then
: embraces Justin
: They hug tenderly
: Individual over-the-shoulder shots of both their faces nuzzling on
: each other's necks.

J放下包，有几秒钟B就这样看着那包。然后J伸出一只手放在B的肩膀上，把手放在B的脖子上将他拉近自己，J稍微的掂起脚尖站着。随后他伸出另一只胳膊绕向B给了他一个拥抱。
B先是站在那里 他的手无措的放在两边，后来他回抱了 J
他们温和的拥抱着，用脸轻触对方的脖子。

: B: Where will you go?
  B:你要去哪裡

: J: I'll think of something
  J:我會知道的

: They release each other and J moves to the door
: Close up of Brian. He is clenching his jaw. Sadness but also
: reflection, contemplation in his eyes. He is thinking, taking it all
: in
: He turns toward the door.

他们松开彼此，J向门走去 。B抽紧了下颌，他的眼睛里是痛苦深思的表情，他在思考发生的这一切，他向门那边走。

: B: Let me know.
  B:記得要告訴我

: J is in the door way and he stares at Brian sadly and pulls the door
: shut

J站在门边 他痛苦的注视了B一会 拉上门

lovehydeken

我的翻譯還不是很好，大家不嫌棄就好，我總覺得詞句可以再更好一些，無奈想不出來，翻譯真的很難啊

lovehydeken

謝謝cookiesumin和lurentt的指正和幫忙翻譯，我把二位的部分加入我在3樓的翻譯，我沒有特別用顏色區分是誰翻譯的，是為了大家閱讀上的方便，請多見諒。謝謝二位讓整段翻譯更加完整。感謝感謝。

我好愛這兩大段，看這兩隻為愛折磨，真是~~又想哭又感動的

lovehydeken

我倒是覺得Michael的那句who wound't?意義也很深，Michael指的是他自己吧，他也曾很愛Brian(在很多BM迷心中，也許覺得Michael現在還愛Brian)，但也是因為Brian的行為，讓Michael選擇愛上Ben。

所以我覺得如果最後BJ不能在一起，其實也代表了BM更不可能，Michael要的東西比Justin還多，如果連Justin都不能讓Brian改變，那就沒有人可以做到。

510爆炸案後的求婚，代表Brian改變了，那對BJ來說是好事，至於最後的結局，只能說畢竟編劇還是走現實面，但我相信Justin會回來的，Justin才是Brian的剋星，從第一季開始鋪陳的一切就證明了這點。

lovehydeken

個人狠狠推薦tsen0627大人製作的這個mv
http://www.qaf1.org/read.php?t ... ;toread=&page=1

歌好畫面佳
在聽了Michael那句He was NEVER perfectly happy!後
就請大家用這個MV好好回味
一到四季中Brian是怎麼傷Justin的
讓他有那樣難過的表情

真是應驗了He was NEVER perfectly happy這句話

唉~~~悲啊悲啊~~~~~~~~~

lovehydeken

「估计你是把nerveousness看成nerveless了。」

哈哈，沒錯我的確看錯了，難怪我還覺得Brian竟然還能不緊張，也太厲害了，謝謝，我再回三樓改