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作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-1 16:01     标题: Joyce的微型短篇*之一(09.08.05更新完结)

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:51 编辑

本来只是客座性质的偶尔练手,结果一写便上了隐,再加上论坛里各位亲们给予的鼓励,给了我坚持写下去的动力,于是决定把从前写的各个独立的小段整合在一起,虽然每篇独立成章,但有着内在联系。新手上路,水平、质量尚待提高,请大家多支持哦~:s18


chapter one:goodbye,my love

Scene:the Pittsburgh airport

Justin was going to board the aeroplane which was to N.Y.  
  

Justin(passport and air ticket in his hand): we don't need any commitment to prove our love, right?

(低着头,片刻无语,突然抬头,凝视着brian)

Justin:I’ll be back,I promise.

              The memorise will belong to us in common,forever.



Justin(上前抱住Brian,在耳边轻轻说):Keep in touch with me,ok?

  
During going forward to the entrance, suddenly Justin turned around and shout aloud.

Justin:Brian!(一时哽咽)

        I—— LOVE——YOU!

Brian一怔,之后微微扯动一下嘴角,神色平静,看不出是喜是悲

Brian:Hey——remember that?

          ——no excuses.no apologies.no regrets.
  
Brian(深深地望着Justin):go,and find your way,sunshine!

Brian露出一抹略带苦涩的含蓄笑容,Justin眼眶微微湿润,伫立在原地

Justin(望着brian挥动的手,默默地):goodbye Pittsburgh.

                                      goodbye——my love.
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-1 16:03

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-5 13:33 编辑

chapter two:missing you

N.Y.CITY  12:00 P.M.

JUSTIN TAYLOR WHO WAS A NEW SHINNING STAR OF ARTS IN N.Y. WAS PAINTING IN HIS APARTMENT.

A RINGING FROM THE TELEPHONE BROKE THE SILENCE OF MID-NIGHT.

HE DIDN'T CARE ABOUT IT AT ALL,AND FOCUSED ON HIS NEW CREATION——MISSING.

AFTER KEEPING NOISY FOR A MOMENT,IT STOPPED.THE ENTIRE ROOM WAS QUIET AGAIN.

SOME TIMES LATER...

SUDDENLY HE PUT DOWN THE BRUSH AND LOOKED AT THE CANVAS THOUGHTFULLY.

Justin(看了一眼手腕上的表,已是凌晨一点,露出一抹淡淡的微笑):DONE.


                                                                                              FOR MY 24-YEAR-OLD.

HE WALKED TO THE SOFA,PUTTING HIS ASS IN IT AND PRESSED THE KEY OF TELEPHONE ANSWERING MACHINE.

TELEPHONE:THERE IS ONE VOICE-MESSAGE YOU'V GOT.

JUSTIN WAS EXHAUSTED,CLOSED HIS EYES.

TELEPHONE(BRIAN'S VOICE):...HEY SUNNY BOY,IT'S ME...HOW'S IT GOING...I AM GOING TO NEWYORK TOMORROW...UH...TAKE A

VACATION.YOU KNOW I'V BEEN BUSY,SO(局促地笑了两声)——WHATEVER,SEE YOU LATER.

JUSTIN STILL KEPT HIS EYES CLOSED WITH A SOFT SMILE.

JUSTIN(幽幽地):MISS YOU...
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-1 16:04

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:52 编辑

chapter three:I'm coming

10:45 A.M.   John F. Kennedy International Airport of N.Y.City

Scene:At the Exit

Brian Kinney who wore a black short coat,dark blue jeans and sunglasses was going out from the exit,carring a baggage.

Brian(停住脚步,摘下墨镜, 环顾四周来来往往忙碌的人们,微微颔首,嘴角漾起一抹自嘲的微笑):God.It's unbelieveable I come here.
         I am absolutly crazy.

The cellphone in his pocket was ringing.He took it out and opened the cover.
A message was on the screen:

     "Hey,welcom.How's NewYork's air?:) Today I have a show in PaceWildenstein.See u there.

     10:20 A.M. From :SUNSHINE"

Brian(盯着屏幕的双眼泄露了心情,笑容更加深了): My sunshine is busy glaring in New York.

Brian closed his cellphone and walked out the terminal.

Scene:Out the teminal

Brian(单手遮挡着刺眼的阳光,抬头看看晴朗如洗的天空,又重新戴上Prada的新款墨镜):
                                                       Hello New York!

                                                                                  I'm coming,my artist.
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-1 16:10

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-5 13:36 编辑

chapter four:I'v been waiting for you

scene:PaceWildenstein Gallery   2:30 P.M.

本该是人迹寥寥的慵懒午后,N.Y.知名画廊PaceWildenstein此刻却衣香鬓影,宾客云集,宛若hollywood大片的首映现场,唯一不同的是没有疯狂fans的尖叫声和太多的闪光灯夺人眼球,来者皆是些慕名而来的艺术爱好者、评论人及艺术经纪人等,当然其中也不乏N.Y.艺术圈中的元老级人物。慢步浏览着墙上一幅幅风格迥异的画作,他们或三两结伴低声耳语几句,或托腮思索着什么,更有些精明的商人已经在角落谈论起此次画展的盈利和接下来市场推广的计划。而让这各路人马赏光和竞相追捧的原因,无非是一个名字——Justin Taylor——近两年来,以其卓越的绘画天赋、独特而敏锐的表达视角,迅速蹿红于N.Y.艺术圈,作品亦被众多收藏家青睐的年轻的艺术家。

PassagerA(兴奋地左顾右盼):I heard he will come today.

PassagerB(一脸茫然):you mean?

PassagerA(鄙夷地看着伙伴):you're kidding,right?
                           
PassagerB(很无奈地,耸耸肩膀,两手一摊)

PassagerA(不置可否地翻个白眼):J.T.
                                                   I mean Justin Taylor is coming to have a short speech later.

PassagerB(兴奋):really?!   oh,god,we're so luncky,man!

           (环视四周):which one would be him?




Brian Kinney身着黑色Armani新款西装,双手插着口袋,自信优雅地步入画廊,随着缓慢移动的人流,开始有一搭无一搭地欣赏着墙上的画作,眼神却散布在画廊的各个角落,寻找着那抹属于他的熟悉的身影。

a few minutes later...

Justin(从背后拍拍Brian的肩膀,含笑,戏谑的口气):Are you looking for someone? Can I help you ?

Brian(从鼻子里闷笑一声,一脸玩世不恭地慢慢转过身):yeah.

看见Justin的一瞬间,眼神专注且复杂,旋即又闪烁着孩子般恶作剧的表情

Brian(抿嘴,看向别处,立刻又调转眼神紧盯着Jusitn,假笑,并一本正经地模仿着):The guy said to me"It's my pleasure to work under you" and he was ever the hotest waiter on the liberal avenue. Do you know him?

Justin忍不住轻声地笑出声

不远处,Justin的经纪人David Brown走到他身边

David(略微打量了一下一旁的Brian,公式化的微笑,算是打过招呼了):Excuse me

Brian(无所谓的耸耸肩膀,招呼不远处的端着饮料盘的waiter):hey waiter~

David把Justin拉到一边,低头在他耳边说了些什么之后便离开了

Brian拿着盛着法国红酒的杯子走近Justin身边

Brian(有点调侃):he is a hot guy

Justin(笑容加深,语带暧昧):so ~~~hot~~~

                                             but——less than somebody

Justin认真的看着Brian,绽开了久违的灿烂笑容,张开双臂

Justin(语带双关):I'v been waiting for you.

Brian(楞了一下,看看周围,确定有一些人用好奇的眼光望着这边,
                 不羁地笑着抱住Justin,语意不明地在耳边低语):sorry,I don't know  you're so urgent,sunshine.
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-1 16:11

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-5 13:37 编辑

chapter five:I 'm proud of you

scene:BY FRENCH WINDOW OF JUSTIN'S APARTMENT    11:35 P.M.


Brian(依着一边的窗框,接过Justin递过来啤酒,喝了一口,眼光在屋里四处游走,打量略微凌乱却干净的屋子): ...nice place

Justin走到Brian身边,面对着巨大的落地窗,带着一丝与白天的意气风发截然相反的疲惫与落寞,欣赏着五光十色的纽约夜景。


Justin(夺过Brian手里的啤酒,喝了一口,看着Brian,轻松地笑):Thanks.It is surprising that you can say it.Are you Brian Kinney? You're sure?

Brian(低笑一声,挑衅地走到Justin身后,单臂勾上他的脖子,轻咬着他的耳垂):Aha~so?What should I say just like me?

Justin被Brian弄得有点痒,却没有躲开,轻笑着,又灌了一口啤酒,显然不打算解释Brian的评价方式向来与尖酸刻薄划等号。


两人一时无语,若有所思,时间仿佛定格在此刻。

Justin(安静地靠在Brian怀里,满足地深吸一口气):I miss you...

Brian(逗弄着在Justin耳边吹气):I miss you too... especially in the midnight.

Brian的话勾起了Justin对年少时那段青涩疯狂的爱恋的回忆,心头泛起丝丝甜蜜。

Justin装过身,一扫刚刚的调侃情绪,认真地凝视着眼前的这个人。

Justin(抚摸着Brian有些胡渣的脸颊):You are always confident,you are still young and hot,just as what Michael said.

Brian(卸下玩世不恭的面具,理了理Justin额前炫目的金发,真诚地):You have not been the little boy,my artist.
                                                                You did a really good job,you know.
                                                                You are successful.
                                                               Now you are famous and have a lot of fans and opportunities.

Brian(温柔地在Justin额头落下轻轻一吻):I'm so proud of you,sunshine.

皎洁的月光透过落地穿撒在两人脚边。Justin与Brian拥着彼此,相视一笑。

突然Brian手机响起。

Brian:Dame shit!

Justin(抿嘴笑着,揶揄Brian):Melody

Brian(不耐烦地接起电话):yeah

Cellphone(Michael' voice,抽泣,努力保持平静):...Ben...he has gone...
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-1 16:13

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-5 13:38 编辑

chapter six:where is Brian?

Scene:in front of Debbie's house

  Doorbell rang.(a moment later...)Debbie opened the door.

  Emmett and Drawboy stood there.

Emmett(双手手指交叉放在身前,勉强扬了扬嘴角,思考如何开口,有点手足无措):Hi,Debbie.I...uh...I've known about it.I

mean...uh...

Drawboy(温柔地看一眼Em,握住他的手,遗憾的看向Deb):I'm sorry for hear that.

Em看着Deb,泪水浸湿眼眶。

Debbie(满脸倦容,强打精神,仍回了Em一个坚强的微笑,上前抱住Em,安慰地拍拍他的肩膀):I know ,honey.Come on and in.


Scene:in the living-room

Debbie(朝冰箱走去):what would you like to drink?
                      Juice?  coffee?

Drawboy(单手搂着Em的肩膀,在沙发坐下):No,thanks,Deb.

Emmett(冷静下来):How's Michael?

Debbie打开冰箱,拿出盛有自制cookie的盘子,僵了一下,转身走向Em.

Debbie(把盘子放下,叹气):Nothing is worse.

                            He has been in his room for an entire day.no eating,no drinking,didn't say any words.

Doorbell rang again.

Debbie:I'm coming.

Debbie opened the door.Ted、Melanie and Lindsay stood there.

Ted(认真地):I think Michael need all of us now,so I called Mel and Linds.

Lindsay(一脸震惊,摇头,拥抱Deb):I can't believe it is true.

Melanie(拥抱Deb,安慰):I'm really sorry.

Debbie(抱着Mel和lindz,双手摸摸她们的背,拍了拍):I know. Thanks for your coming girls.Come with me.

Scene:in the living-room

Emmett(激动地站起来,拥抱Lindsay和Melanie):oh,girls.

Drawboy(向Lindsay和Melanie点头):Hi~

Melanie(挤出个微笑):Hi~

Melanie(转向Debbie,无奈地耸耸肩):About Ben's disease,I mean——so——I don't know how to say it.

Debbie(了然地):Yes,we all know the day will come sooner or later,but it is still a tremendous hit to Michael.

Ted(四处张望了一下):Uh...where is Michael?

大家面面相觑,一时无语,悲伤地情绪弥漫开来。

Debbie:He is upstairs,in his room.

Lindsay(平复了情绪,突然意识到什么,环视大家):Where damn is Brian?
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-1 16:18

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-5 13:39 编辑

Justin's diary(之一)
分离,对很多人来说,可能是痛苦的终点。  
Separation, for many people, may be a finishi.

但,我坚信,它对我们来说,必会是幸福的起点。
But i believe,it must be a start of happiness for us.

我们更深切地意识到对方之于自己生命的意义。
We are more profoundly aware of the meaning to each other in our lives.

生命,是一种围绕着爱的回归,我们就是彼此的终点,就像最初开始的那样。
If life is a  return surrounding  love , we wlli be the end of each other, just as the very beginning.
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-1 16:19

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:56 编辑

Justin's diary(之二)
Brian said "love should not be a sacrifice".

So I came to NewYork two years ago.

When I lost some things,I gained the others.

The true love should be a strong back of everyone,no matter when and where,just he or she need it.
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-1 16:21

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-5 13:40 编辑

chapter seven:To be with you,my friends

scene: in Justin's Studio of N.Y.City    3:15 P.M.
A fierce debate was being between Justin and David(Justin's agent).

David(烦躁地在不大的空间里踱来踱去,松了松领带,停下来深吸一口气,尽力让自己保持冷静,转过身面对Justin):Taylor,please calm down ,and then think about it again,carefully,ok?
Justin(单手从身后撑着,靠着工作台,冷静地再次试图跟David沟通):David I'll come back in a few days later,I promise.My friend is having a hard time now.He needs me behind him.
David(奋力摘下金边半框眼镜,激动地提高了声调):You——You can't imagine how many people who have talent are managed to show themselves every day!Hard working is just for these which you have achieved——success and fame!But look at you,give up National Artists Association's invitation so easily!
Justin(沉思片刻,站直了身体,走近David,抓住他的肩膀,站着他,郑重地):I know you did a lot of things for me David.So I'v been appreciating you very much.But——I'm sorry this time...for my decision.
David(看着Justin眼中的坚定,有点感动,戴回手上几欲捏碎的眼镜):...I give you my words you are going to regret some day.
David(利落地掏出手机,拨了一通电话,认命地口气略有点缓和):But I don't wanna be like you.I will do my best to delay the date.
David's cellphone:hello(Tom Gil,the chairman of National Artists Association)
David(非常干练地):yeah,Mr. Gil,this is David Brown...
... ...
on the other side Justin dialed Brian's number...
Jusitn's cellphone:yeah
Justin:listen,I decide to go back with you.
        Michael and Ben both are our friends.I think I should be with you together at this time. There is nothing more important than that.So wait for me.
David(向Tom Gil表达了谢意,并代表Justin表示很荣幸受到邀请,结束电话,公事化地口吻):Done.But remember,you have only one week.
Justin(真诚地看了看David,微笑):Got it,thanks.

scene:in a taxi which was on a way to the airport
Brian(深沉地笑着,开玩笑):Are you serious,sunny boy?The guy,I mean your hot agent Mr.Brown.Have you got a permission from him?
Brian's cellphone(Justin无奈地):Come on Brian,David is a good guy.Please don't kid him ok?I will arrive at the airport in half an hour later.See you then.
Brian(轻声笑了笑,恢复了正经):hey Justin——
Brian's cellphone(等着Brian接下来的话):...
Brian(欲语还休):Uh...nothing...
Brian's cellphone:...Michael is gonna be ok,right?
Brian(轻叹一声,眼神迷茫地看着车窗外的落日余晖,含糊不清地):...I don't know...

Scene:in Justin's Studio
Justin(拿着手机,有些出神,与电话那头的Brian一同陷入沉默):...
作者: jay19860516    时间: 2009-8-1 16:34

zzzzz,我还蛮喜欢看的里~

加油哦~~~~
作者: cathy1999    时间: 2009-8-1 17:54

很喜欢,文短小精悍,中英文格式,继续期待,楼主加油!
作者: janlam    时间: 2009-8-1 18:01

加油....{:3_272:}
期待后续故事....
作者: hpl    时间: 2009-8-1 22:28

{:3_217:}哇!幾篇小短文集合起來,有一種作品集的氣勢喔!
作者: cora    时间: 2009-8-2 13:27

呵呵,终于开了短篇集了~~Joyce想把之前几个帖子(还有大家的回帖)合并到这个作品集么?
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-2 16:30

14# cora
之前那些大家的回帖也可以放进这里来吗?!如果可以,那当然好了~~~做这个新帖之前还觉得蛮可惜的,原来分散在各个帖子中的回帖没法一起贴过来呢~~~   谢谢,版主提醒,呵,而且我发现cora已经把我这个帖子分类改成了“合集”喽,再次感谢 :s14
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-3 14:04

突然发觉,斑竹帮我弄的“新家”没有通知过大家~~~呵
cora帮我把之前的帖子及大家跟帖的留言都放到了【原创】goodbye,my love里了哦~~~
预知故事后续发展,去那里看吧,我会尽快抽空更新的,希望大家多来支持~~~
:s08 互相转告啊!!!!!呵~
作者: mint.chan    时间: 2009-8-3 16:58

厉害哦,加油
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-3 19:35

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:57 编辑

chapter eight:heartless asshole

scene:tomb field
During a simple farewell ceremony,everybody had been sad facing to Ben's Tombstone.
Debbie(抱住Michael,难掩担忧):are you ok,sweet heart?
Michael(安慰地拍拍Debbie的背):yeah,I'm fine...Don't worry about me,Mom.

Mel、Linds、Em、Ted and Hunter站在一旁,默默看着坚强的母子俩。  
Hunter(动情地):Ben has gone...but we are still here with you...together.
Michael、Debbie听着Hunter的话,从悲伤的情绪中恢复了一些,祖孙三代默契地深深看了看彼此,忍住眼泪回给彼此一个鼓励的眼光。

Hunter(想了想,慎重地开口):...uh...besides I have decided to transfer to Pittsburgh University.

Debbie、Michael一同看向Hunter,其它人也纷纷露出惊讶的神情。

Michael(迷惑不解):why?...you have never talked to me before.
Debbie(认真的看着Hunter):Not for us, is it? you know it is unnecessary.
Hunter(两手不停地摩擦着两侧的裤子口袋,眼神中透露出难言的脆弱):I just...just...don't want to be alone,thinking about...death.
Michael(恍然大悟,上前一下抱住Hunter,沮丧地深深自责):Oh~~~I am so sorry...
Debbie(抚慰着Hunter的手,轻声):honey,you will be alright,trust me,and welcome back home.

at the same time
Mel(与Linds窃窃私语):The fact has proved Brian is a heartless asshole.
Linds(一时语塞,无奈地耸耸肩膀,叹了口气):...
Ted(无意间听到她们的对话,眼神四处游移着想找些理由解释):...uh...mybe...I...un...I think——
Ted(瞪大眼睛,望着不远处一个英挺的身影箭步向这边走来,大声地):he's coming.

众人闻言,看向那个拎着行李袋风尘仆仆朝这边走来的人,定睛一瞧,他背后隐约有缕缕金丝迎风飘舞。

Emmtte(一脸不可思议,嘴张张合合几次之后,确定不是幻觉):...Oh,my god...



PS:“新家”的人气貌似不如从前各个短篇的呦,不晓得症结在哪儿:s36 ,郁闷ing      怕“新篇”因此被冷落,特别在这里再发一次(虽然goodbye,my love的帖子里才是首发),希望能多点人看到,Joyce很用心在写呢~~~:s09
作者: moonriver    时间: 2009-8-3 22:55

看见Justin的一瞬间,眼神专注且复杂,旋即又闪烁着孩子般恶作剧的表情 ---- 完全能想象Brian当时的表情!
我喜欢这类的短文,有临场感,谢谢LZ!
作者: cora    时间: 2009-8-4 13:15

Hunter(两手不停地摩擦着两侧的裤子口袋,眼神中透露出难言的脆弱):I just...just...don't want to be alone,thinking about...death.

Ben走了只剩Hunter一个人独自面对病魔,可以想象他的心情……

PS  Joyce可能大家只是对英文有点怕怕。如果你觉得英文写对白才有感觉,可以继续用英文写,下面再加上中文翻译,试试这样怎样?
作者: janlam    时间: 2009-8-4 13:25

PS:“新家”的人气貌似不如从前各个短篇的呦,不晓得症结在哪儿 ,郁闷ing      怕“新篇”因此被冷落,特别在这里再发一次(虽然goodbye,my love的帖子里才是首发),希望能多点人看到,Joyce很用心在写呢~~~


我觉得是因为你更新了,而大家不知道你更新了.
可许你可以试一下,每次更新,在标题上写上更新的时间:
如:     [合集]Joyce的微型短篇集锦(090804更新)
会好点.
因为我次次来这都会留意你的文哦....
作者: cora    时间: 2009-8-4 13:40

21# janlam
janlam提醒得对!! 加分鼓励
作者: Amber'    时间: 2009-8-4 13:43

Joyce好厉害啊~~突然冒出许多短篇大多出自你的手笔,都有用心看
其实短篇每次都需要新构思,长篇则是由一个构思引发的
2个都需要才思泉涌...{:3_255:}
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-4 15:58

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-15 17:05 编辑

chapter nine:sorry,I'm late

scene:Debbie's house       7:40 P.M.

in the living-room

Debbie(拉着Justin的手坐在沙发上,轻拍着他看似依旧稚嫩的脸颊,微笑着感慨):sunshine...look at you...oh honey...you're charming so much.

Emmtte(捏捏Justin的下巴,由衷地):sweet heart,you are like a noble prince.

Teb(拿着马克杯,呷了一口咖啡,站在一旁附和):aha~absolutly.

Justin露出了久违的羞涩笑容,亦如高中毕业舞会前大家眼中那个盛装打扮的孩子。

Hunter(认真地):if  you didn't have Brian,I would love you.

众人皆愣在原地,定格两秒后,“哈哈”配合着Hunter的冷笑话。

Lindsay(手撑着额头,头痛状,闭上眼无奈地笑,自言自语):oh~no~

Melamine(倚靠着流理台,放进嘴里一口蛋糕):so how is it going in NewYork?

Justin(笑着回应):fine,just too busy.

Melamine(胳膊顶了顶旁边的Lindsay,低声地):oh,you really should taste it.the cake is so damn delicious!

Debbie(忍不住插话,骄傲地):thanks,sweety.Vic's secret method——

大家敏感地顿时陷入沉默......

Debbie(看看大家,不自然地大笑几声,眼神中却流露出淡淡的悲伤):It doesn't matter,he likes being a focus.

Lindsay白了一眼Melamine,Melamine吐吐舌头,一脸无辜,不作声地闷头继续吃着蛋糕,味如嚼蜡。

Justin(拉着Debbie的手,看着她,惋惜地):I'm sorry for your lost.

Debbie(担忧地回头看看楼梯):thanks.Michael is more serious...

众人不约而同地看向通往Michael房间的楼梯......

Justin(眼神坚定):Trust him...Brian must can handle it.

............................................................................................................................
scene:Michael's room

Michael(坐在床上,手里翻着心爱的漫画书,含笑回忆着):the first time,we met in my comic book store.actually he looked so hot.I still remember his brown jacket,his glasses and his...(自嘲尴尬地笑笑)ass.

Brian(低着头坏坏地笑,看不出是认真还是玩笑地接茬):aha~fuck is forever.

Michael(无奈地斜睨了一眼身边双肘撑着半躺在床上的老友,不置可否地继续着自己的思绪):maybe...maybe a first sight love started from that time.

Brian(不耐烦地好像在说着老掉牙的故事似的接茬):and then you became his husband in damn Canada.(不可思议地看着Michael,皱着眉,逗弄的语气)Jesus Christ you married!

Michael(被Brian孩子气的耿耿于怀逗笑了):come on Brian,because I had grown up.I had no idea why you cared about it for a long time.

Brian(皱眉,若有所思):I didn't know ...I didn't know untill that night...Babylon's bomb night...(神经质地从鼻子里闷笑出声)fuck damn crazy.

Michael(了然地陈述着事实):Justin has been special for you from the very beginning.you were a real coward,whatever you recognize or not.

Brian陷入某种可怕地失去Justin的假设中,仿佛时间又回到了那个混乱可怕的晚上,他沉默着......

Michael(认真地问):if you lost Justin,what would you do?

Brian(想了想,放弃了继续假设):...I don't know...(松了一口气)fortunately he is alive.

Michael手中的漫画书一滑,掉在了地板上。他再也无力撑起坚强的伪装,双手掩面哭泣。

Brian(坐起身子,一把搂过Michael颤抖的身体,让他的头枕着自己的肩膀,一边亲吻着他的额头,一边抚慰着他的头发):sorry Mikey...I'm late...
作者: cash212    时间: 2009-8-4 17:50

有点儿没看懂。。
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-4 22:22     标题: 最终回更新喽!

本帖最后由 joycechen1985 于 2009-8-7 23:59 编辑

chapter ten:tomorrow is a new day

sometimes we do not feel                 有时候,我们感受不到
like we want to feel                     我们想感受的
sometimes we do not achieve              有时候,我们达不到
what we want to achieve                  我们想达到的
sometimes things that happe              有时候,周围发生的事情
do not make sense                        毫无意义
sometimes life leads us in directions    有时候,生活把我们带向
that are beyond our control              无法控制的方向


it is at these times,most of all         就是这些时候,我们中的多数人
that we need someone                     都需要有个人
who will quietly understand us           默默地理解我们
and be there to support us               在身边支持我们
i want you to know                       我希望你知道
that i am here for you                   我就在你身边
in every way                             无论发生什么事情
and remember that though                 记住
things may be difficult now              虽然现在困难重重
tomorrow is a new day                    但明天,又是崭新的一天


                                                     ——《tomorrow is a new day》


自述(Michael):when the sun rises as usual,lives still keep going on...I know

six days ago,I wept with a broken heart in Brians's arms.(笑)damn it,I even imagine he will laugh me out as it in rest of my life.(郁闷了一会儿)ok,whatever,who care.I just know they supported me through the most difficult time of my life.But——(神秘地笑)Ben and I helped somebody too at the same time.


scene:Brian's loft   
       in the kingsize bed  11:05 P.M.

Brian(低吼一声,释放了积压已久的热情,汗湿地瘫软在Justin身上,笑着喘息):god,you have an amazing,practiced technology sunshine!
Justin(酣畅的情事过后,满足地翻个身,把Brian压在身下,笑着,手在对方胸口轻轻抚摸,暧昧地):you are still crazy and good at fuck.
Brian(自负地笑,玩弄着Justin前额的湿湿的头发):I am an expert at any time...you know it,don't you,honey?
Justin(并不打算否认,幸福地笑着,哄着孩子气的Brian,轻轻舔咬着他的耳垂):yeah,you are always the best.I really want you to stay inside me forever.
Brian(被Justin逗弄得全身骚动起来,抓住他的手,用力把Justin重新压回身下,将他的手拉至头顶上,用低哑性感的嗓音诱惑着):let's do it again and i will make you more satisfied and let you forget those guys in New York.
Justin(闻言,认真得像是许下承诺似的):nobody but you.
Brian(欲火焚身的野兽,意外听到如此真情地告白,一瞬间,为之动容,深情地睇着Justin,不知是说给自己听还是对Justin说):...you have no chance to regret sunshine...because...I won't let you go anyway...

接着满室只剩下两人交缠的旖旎风光和令人血脉喷张淫糜呻吟,甜蜜的爱意尽在不言中......

自述(Jusitn):if life is a journey surrounding love,we will be the end of each other,just as the very beginning.
                our stories started from a sex but love is our happy ending...tomorrow is a new day and we have been ready for it,new stories belong to us will begin immediately...



THE END.


PS:终于告一段落了,god,好辛苦。原来写故事真的会上瘾,之前偶尔写些随笔、散文什么的还不觉得怎样,这次玩票地续写B&J的故事,竟然连写了两周。:s22    今天发发狠,告诉自己一定要搞定ending,然后开始休息,好好工作、学习。感谢大家这些日子的关注与支持,希望最终章能让你们满意,呵~88
作者: janlam    时间: 2009-8-4 23:13

用里把Justin重新压回身下----用力...

LZ
休息是应该滴
不过{:3_246:}
别休息太久啦

轮家还等着您的新文呢....
作者: cora    时间: 2009-8-7 22:16

love is the happy ending
好喜欢这句话!! 简单而有力{:3_204:}
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2009-8-7 22:58

28# cora
有感而发而已    season5结局总让我感到遗憾,即使知道生活中本就有太多“错过”,但是人嘛,总会期待着唯美的圆满,编剧们不给的幸福,我给他们,也满足自己的小小愿望:s13   
PS:goodbye my love里面的短篇我校对过了,统一了时态,订正了一些小错误,so请cora把那个放到《Joyce的微型短篇*之一》之前好吗?谢~呵
作者: dacheng8    时间: 2009-8-15 00:16     标题: oh!

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作者: r7f123    时间: 2009-8-15 02:38

還ok.繼續加油
作者: 马马虎虎的鱼    时间: 2011-6-9 13:07

回帖支持
作者: Anja    时间: 2011-6-15 19:13

期待坛子里多些英文原创~
作者: 马马虎虎的鱼    时间: 2011-7-7 18:17

不错不错
作者: nika_yoyo    时间: 2011-7-8 12:03

楼主牛人,占位慢看!:s47
作者: bigbeans    时间: 2014-12-23 21:59

I want to be beautiful for you one more time.
作者: joycechen1985    时间: 2015-3-9 22:54

回复 36# bigbeans




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